Read to chapter 35 because I forgot that this was a GL and was wondering where the heck is the ML? XD I don't read GL, period. It's just not my thing, so I can't really judge accurately whether the romance is well-done or not. From my impression of the story so far, it moves pretty slowly. However, I think that's expected. As far as I know, GL moves a lot slower in softer ways. The actual writing on a grammar and correctness level is good. Actually, I was surprised by how little dialogue there was until around the later 20s chapters. It's funny because usually I find that webnovels have too much dialogue and not enough detail in between conversations and scene to scene... So weirdly enough, I would want more dialogue in here because when I hit the later 20s and 30s mark, I felt more engaged/immersed in the story. Before, I felt it was just all narrating without feeling like the events were occurring actively in my head. Lastly, one minor thing. Please don't say B City, please make up a fictional name! >< Whenever I see a letter name city I feel completely brought out of immersion. Even though stories are fictional, it's the suspending of belief that makes stories come alive. All that besides, really well written story! To be honest, it's not my cup of tea; however, I can't deny that for fans of this romance, this is a real treat! ;)
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