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The_Good_Devil
The_Good_DevilLv54yrThe_Good_Devil

ok. honest review here: the story is absolutely unique and interesting specially the part of the wise old man as the main character. But unfortunately it has some problems. it may not be problem, more like not my cup of tea. the story is lacking in terms of action and adventure. the first 20 chapter is all about pure craftsmanship and after some time it became boring. I mean it's good to learn about new thing. but when sewing a dress take a few chapters for the job to be done and most of the information about the process of creating the dress is forgeted by most readers and has no point in the future plot-development then the chapters will become with no purpose and you can skip them. anyway if you are that type of person who enjoys the calm novels without any cliffhanger then this is good novel for you.

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Spending My Retirement In A Game

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Dark_moon_2008
Dark_moon_2008Lv3Dark_moon_2008

Bro the story is literally about a craftsman of course the first few chapters are going to be about crafting

The_Good_Devil
The_Good_DevilLv5The_Good_Devil

I never write a review before getting to understand the novel. I read more than 30 chapter and the author the following the same pattern of writing.

Dark_moon_2008:Bro the story is literally about a craftsman of course the first few chapters are going to be about crafting
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Dark_moon_2008
Dark_moon_2008Lv3Dark_moon_2008

How does this relate to my reply? I wasn’t saying that you didn’t read or understand the novel, I said that the first 20 chapter would obviously be about crafting. By the way sorry if I read your reply wrong because of the grammar mistakes .

The_Good_Devil:I never write a review before getting to understand the novel. I read more than 30 chapter and the author the following the same pattern of writing.