Review Detail of Enjoyteddy in REBORN IN MARVEL WITH BAN POWER

So I’m not sure why this is getting so manny high reviews. I have it a good try but it is truly almost unreadable. Now why this bothers me so much is because it’s super easy to use grammarly or any other word processor that will fix most of the problems the author is having but he is clearly not utilizing any. The story is also very jarring in its flow. I hope you takes this as constructive criticism and not hate and improve your story. I would love to come back and read it at that point.