Review Detail of NexCriticz in REBORN IN MARVEL WITH BAN POWER
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Like the fact the story is made around the mutants. normally marvel fanfics start out next to spiderman and go further there. MC has a unique personality thats quite narcissistic and show quite a temper. It is a shame that there are things about his powers, like using the wrong ability name or the fact where he cant use all his powers from gomu gomu no mi when he has bans powers. Ok i get that the writer doesn’t want to make the mc too op but he shouldve thought about that before giving him 5 powers (bans power, 3 fruits and haki). I liked the fact that he only had jean as gf but now that he is thinking of having multiple girls makes the story less fun to read. almost all fanfics are harem why not stay with 1 girl for once. And lastly the sentences are sometimes hard to understand as he writes with broken english. I get that u make some mistakes ,but this is rly hard to read if ur not first language isn’t english like me.
REBORN IN MARVEL WITH BAN POWER
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E*** it's a dirty lonely bastard that can't understand that every fantasy novel doesn't have to have a harem. Look if you enjoy harems that's fine, but don't come over here acting like it is required in the story. Plus, marvel comics also never had a harem and there is a reason why most countries doesn't accept polygamy. *flies away on my elitist hater cloud*
D_REAPER:It's fantasy for a reason
bluesbarr:E*** it's a dirty lonely bastard that can't understand that every fantasy novel doesn't have to have a harem. Look if you enjoy harems that's fine, but don't come over here acting like it is required in the story. Plus, marvel comics also never had a harem and there is a reason why most countries doesn't accept polygamy. *flies away on my elitist hater cloud*
Look dude, he just gave his opinion in a very civilized way. That's how criticism works, but then you (I catch myself doing it sometimes too) take it as a direct attack on your preferences. Listen in the end it's the author that chooses how his story is going to go and if he wants a harem he will write one in. Now if the guy had been an asshole and begun insulting the author then I would totally agree with you that he should STFU and go read something else, but alas that wasn't the case. And i'm sorry i called you a bastard I'm one as well
D_REAPER:First of all I'm not saying it's required I'm just saying to stop complaining
bluesbarr:Look dude, he just gave his opinion in a very civilized way. That's how criticism works, but then you (I catch myself doing it sometimes too) take it as a direct attack on your preferences. Listen in the end it's the author that chooses how his story is going to go and if he wants a harem he will write one in. Now if the guy had been an asshole and begun insulting the author then I would totally agree with you that he should STFU and go read something else, but alas that wasn't the case. And i'm sorry i called you a bastard I'm one as well
usually its note even the author that chooses wether theyr story will be a harem or not...very often its just author sayng hes making a poll letting readers decide or telling readers to write it in the commets...
bluesbarr:Look dude, he just gave his opinion in a very civilized way. That's how criticism works, but then you (I catch myself doing it sometimes too) take it as a direct attack on your preferences. Listen in the end it's the author that chooses how his story is going to go and if he wants a harem he will write one in. Now if the guy had been an asshole and begun insulting the author then I would totally agree with you that he should STFU and go read something else, but alas that wasn't the case. And i'm sorry i called you a bastard I'm one as well
