Review Detail of WuSamuel in Sex with a Ghost 3

Okay so this is actually my first review so I'll do my best... Firstly I truly commend Author San for a beautifully written story. The characters(both main & side) all possess a certain degree of depth to them which readers can Identify with to some extent. I also like your incorporation of certain elements like : the attitudes of a typical Nigerians response to questions (asked) as well as the lifestyles shown in resemblance of certain cities in Nigeria. For future works though you could try picking a single character as the main -HERO- then try developing the story around that character.. E.g. Ekene actually has a great great grand mother who is the spirit wife to the current leader of hell2...thus she acts to spoil some of the plans placed by the evil witches?! Also more research on the various gods/goddesess of different tribes would be cool... Adding some elements of a quest which involves the Hero traveling to other states where he encounters Gay-Hausa djinns could be interesting also.. Overall there's room for much development... Good-luck..