Review Detail of Loyalscum in Exalted Warlock

I agree with the others you do write well but you have a big propblem with repitition i have it to in my work since i keep repeating the same word like massive to describe something all the time. Also the way you portrayed the the world tree was wrong in my opinion when you were describeing it you contradicted yourself plus something as widly known as the world tree does not need that much description just be Vague and ket the readers mind run wild. I was able to tell exactly what you were trying to do in 2 sentences. When describing godly beings i suggest the same tactic unless you got a clear description without having to repeat the same word to describe them. Besides that good job