It's incredible, and forgive the oxymoron but it has credible world-building and characters that aren't fucking retarded without a logical explanation, the names are a bit weird, but once you think about the fact that it's a different world it makes sense, and, a god-send of most stories, it has a map! 10/10, the only grammatical error I've seen so far is accidentally saying teh instead of the in like chapter 60
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LIKESociableHermit:Thank you for your kind words, and your comment. I've seen people complain about my names a bit, and I can definitely see why. Imight rework them in the future, though I absolutely want to retain the 'otherness'.