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Brovahkiin
BrovahkiinLv55yr
2019-05-19 19:35

It's incredible, and forgive the oxymoron but it has credible world-building and characters that aren't fucking retarded without a logical explanation, the names are a bit weird, but once you think about the fact that it's a different world it makes sense, and, a god-send of most stories, it has a map! 10/10, the only grammatical error I've seen so far is accidentally saying teh instead of the in like chapter 60

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SociableHermit
SociableHermitAuthor

Thank you for your kind words, and your comment. I've seen people complain about my names a bit, and I can definitely see why. Imight rework them in the future, though I absolutely want to retain the 'otherness'.

Bartzabel
BartzabelLv11

Now I only want to start reading it to see the eccentricity of your names. 😂

KingGeorg
KingGeorgLv14

Pleas don’t change Mr. Bombastic Hahahaha

SociableHermit:Thank you for your kind words, and your comment. I've seen people complain about my names a bit, and I can definitely see why. Imight rework them in the future, though I absolutely want to retain the 'otherness'.
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th_Lv12

I've found this novel when searched for kingdom building novels. I'm writing this review (actually my first review here) because this frustrating "has not enough reviews" is unfair to this well written novel and I believe can deal harm and demotivate author. Unfortunately there is not so much of kingdom building currently (as of chapter 40), first book is focused more on introduction of characters, merchant stuff and brandy (you know the deal, as usual divine knowledge from the other world makes genius prince somewhat richer, in this case knowledge is about brandy but not only about it, though). Second book focuses on political stuff and... brandy. So far author delivered everything promised in synopsis and that is good. Surely there are some not very polished plot twists, background setting and story development, personally I find it unbelievable that there are no navigation instruments yet when there are lengthy sea travels and guns in the world. But whatever, it is fantasy world after all. First book covers about five years of main character life, but I didn't feel that story is rushed. Considering all things together there are no THAT BIG and obvious plot holes, character decisions seems logical and rational, fitting setting. There are different religions in this novel and they seem to affect politics. No much focus on cultivation as in the most Chinese novels with levels, qi and stuff. No gaming elements. Magic is not mentioned explicitly, however there is some kind of mysterious stuff I guess. Battle scenes are reasonably detailed, characters are powerful but not completely overpowered. No questionable romance, no harem, no all this crap, at least yet. No misogyny, though. As far as I remember there were no any female characters until last couple of chapters. BTW, chapters itself are lengthy enough. Overall this is one of the most interesting novels I've read on this site up to date. If you enjoy Release That Witch, Kingdom's Bloodline or Rise of the Lord, then you're likely to enjoy this novel as well, though this novel is different from the mentioned once.

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