Review Detail of mysteriousnyaw00 in [BL] SYSTEM, WTF!!!(Hiatus)

The grammar is sometime a little bit off, its a little bit messy cuz of to many pov however the story is quite enjoyable... The character has quite an interesting characteristic which is kind of different from other characters..and the system is just like the title suggest... The storyline although kinda rush but it give a good amount of satisfaction...it is wrap up nicely until the cliffhanger is not seen much.... Im giving the author thumbs ups and great encouragement cuz they obviously can grow a lot better💪💪💪👍👍👍😙😙😙😙