Review Detail of Audrey_Valtierra in [BL] SYSTEM, WTF!!!(Hiatus)

This story has a fairly good hook, but the execution is kinda sloppy. I like the idea of a system and all it entails. I even like that the MC is so far out of his comfort zone, but he's a little hard to get a solid grip on when he's terrified of the prince one moment then glaring at him the next.