Review Detail of EidenSensei in Peter Parker/Spiderman One Shots

The one-shots overall are fine, but the devolvement needs a little work. For example, in chapter 1 you could add a part before their arrival at Stark Tower, maybe in the classroom where they got the permission-ship or a part where it shows Tony's and Peter's bond. In chapter 2, I don't have anything to say after all the chapter was completely fine. In chapter 3, maybe the reason why Peter and Ned were late could've added to the story. I loved your story! -Eiden