Rather good storyline. I guess writer has difficulties with English grammar, but that is fine with me. I don't understand some people complaining. This story is literally different than common stories. The writer is just beginner, so to expect Lord of the Rings story, is kind of too much. I am at least grateful about new approach. Good work writer and have fun writing. Do not listen to haters, they are just jealous about their lack of imagination. So just keep dreaming and everything will be fine :)
JennyS
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