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Review Detail of Druzilla in The Geared Immortal

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Druzilla
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The story started off good, I loved the forst two arcs but the third didn't have enough focus on MC to the point where he was a side character and 4th arc only mentioned him once up to where I was. There are grammatical errors but still perfectly readable, character development was good world building is nice and overall a decent first attempt for a writer. The story just completely lost my interest by the 4th arc mistaken identity and I don't want to spend money on it anymore. Still worth a look since some people will like it.

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The Geared Immortal

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LightKnightInDark
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He didn't even send somone to check out what's going on his mortal palace. MC started to stay this world's SJ's house, Admitted into academy, Start studying ( more than 30 chapter ) than in academy life started teaching the teachers , invented callphone ( 30+ chapters again), than start demon invantion ( 40+ cahpters) , than defending agains demons( 25+ chapters and still going on...) while his womens are being flarted by this world's SJ ) . So droppped it.