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ErozothDraeor
ErozothDraeorLv65yrErozothDraeor

The novel is almost perfect. ALMOST, and unfortunately the not perfect part is the MC which is a huge part. I am at chapter 18, and the MC lacks brain function. He almost died once from eating beast meat, to much energy, makes sense. Second time he found a stronger beast and same thing AGAIN, almost died, he is not stupid he just lacks the brain capacity to think: weak best=strong energy, stronger best=stronger energy. If it was earth he would be the stupid kid that touches fire twice because it has different color and his brain could not make the connection. Chapter 17 he lets potential rapists and murders (his age) go free (hell he even protects them from death) obviously later on they push him into a life and death situation. The NEXT CHAPTER he kills someone so so he will get directions to a village (simplified of course, no spoilers). OP MC is ALWAYS <<<<< competent smart MC. I only bother writing the review because how disappointing it is, this could have been 4.6/5 easily with a slightly better MC, no need for perfect.

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ErozothDraeor
ErozothDraeorLv6ErozothDraeor

To be clear, I do not recommend. At one point when a novel gets so annoying to read you are always angry seeing the plot holes and lack of logic its time to drop. The MC is only as smart as the author allows him (or as the author is).

DaoOfCulture
DaoOfCultureLv14DaoOfCulture

Lol

ErozothDraeor:To be clear, I do not recommend. At one point when a novel gets so annoying to read you are always angry seeing the plot holes and lack of logic its time to drop. The MC is only as smart as the author allows him (or as the author is).
daoistkitty
daoistkittyLv15daoistkitty

I know my words won’t have any weight since I haven’t read a chapter yet. But it sounds to me like an innocent and ignorant **** gets sent to another world and gets himself hurt for his innocent and ignorant actions. I mean if magic existed how would you know magical beasts are poisonous to eat cause of their energy that your body isn’t ready or made for? And if you could beat a monster and was confident, why wouldn’t you try to stare death in the face to fight it and get taught a valuable lesson? And maybe he didn’t know those people were bad guys, I mean in a society where we treat criminals better than most citizens, why not save them? Why not try to make companions and see them survive? Sounds to me like a innocent MC who needs to learn about the dog eat dog world the hard way

13th_Night
13th_NightLv1313th_Night

Mc is some government agent who protect the world from the dark, so he is not so innocent.

daoistkitty:I know my words won’t have any weight since I haven’t read a chapter yet. But it sounds to me like an innocent and ignorant **** gets sent to another world and gets himself hurt for his innocent and ignorant actions. I mean if magic existed how would you know magical beasts are poisonous to eat cause of their energy that your body isn’t ready or made for? And if you could beat a monster and was confident, why wouldn’t you try to stare death in the face to fight it and get taught a valuable lesson? And maybe he didn’t know those people were bad guys, I mean in a society where we treat criminals better than most citizens, why not save them? Why not try to make companions and see them survive? Sounds to me like a innocent MC who needs to learn about the dog eat dog world the hard way
13th_Night
13th_NightLv1313th_Night

Mc is some government agent who protect the world from the dark, so he is not so innocent.

daoistkitty:I know my words won’t have any weight since I haven’t read a chapter yet. But it sounds to me like an innocent and ignorant **** gets sent to another world and gets himself hurt for his innocent and ignorant actions. I mean if magic existed how would you know magical beasts are poisonous to eat cause of their energy that your body isn’t ready or made for? And if you could beat a monster and was confident, why wouldn’t you try to stare death in the face to fight it and get taught a valuable lesson? And maybe he didn’t know those people were bad guys, I mean in a society where we treat criminals better than most citizens, why not save them? Why not try to make companions and see them survive? Sounds to me like a innocent MC who needs to learn about the dog eat dog world the hard way
VictoriousFighting
VictoriousFightingLv4VictoriousFighting

Yes definitely, your words doesn't weight much. And clearly you haven't read it which made you ignorant. Well, a wise sage said that you should witness it before make a comment about it, but surely you're not. Meh, I just like to rant so I beg for forgiveness.

daoistkitty:I know my words won’t have any weight since I haven’t read a chapter yet. But it sounds to me like an innocent and ignorant **** gets sent to another world and gets himself hurt for his innocent and ignorant actions. I mean if magic existed how would you know magical beasts are poisonous to eat cause of their energy that your body isn’t ready or made for? And if you could beat a monster and was confident, why wouldn’t you try to stare death in the face to fight it and get taught a valuable lesson? And maybe he didn’t know those people were bad guys, I mean in a society where we treat criminals better than most citizens, why not save them? Why not try to make companions and see them survive? Sounds to me like a innocent MC who needs to learn about the dog eat dog world the hard way
IdHc
IdHcLv4IdHc

That's why you shouldn't make an argument without reading the material. To avoid making a fool of yourself.

daoistkitty:I know my words won’t have any weight since I haven’t read a chapter yet. But it sounds to me like an innocent and ignorant **** gets sent to another world and gets himself hurt for his innocent and ignorant actions. I mean if magic existed how would you know magical beasts are poisonous to eat cause of their energy that your body isn’t ready or made for? And if you could beat a monster and was confident, why wouldn’t you try to stare death in the face to fight it and get taught a valuable lesson? And maybe he didn’t know those people were bad guys, I mean in a society where we treat criminals better than most citizens, why not save them? Why not try to make companions and see them survive? Sounds to me like a innocent MC who needs to learn about the dog eat dog world the hard way
daoistkitty
daoistkittyLv15daoistkitty

Politicians do it all the time. I don’t see why I couldn’t

IdHc:That's why you shouldn't make an argument without reading the material. To avoid making a fool of yourself.
IdHc
IdHcLv4IdHc

As if politicians are people to emulate lmao

daoistkitty:Politicians do it all the time. I don’t see why I couldn’t
daoistkitty
daoistkittyLv15daoistkitty

Lol

IdHc:As if politicians are people to emulate lmao
13th_Night
13th_NightLv1313th_Night

I have no idea what imao means. Can someone explain it to me? Pretty please?

Cecil_2005
Cecil_2005Lv4Cecil_2005

It means "Laughing my #ss off"

13th_Night:I have no idea what imao means. Can someone explain it to me? Pretty please?
13th_Night
13th_NightLv1313th_Night

The pure me is corrupted. Thanks ☺

Cecil_2005:It means "Laughing my #ss off"
Cecil_2005
Cecil_2005Lv4Cecil_2005

No problem... As long as it helps you

13th_Night:The pure me is corrupted. Thanks ☺
TheDao1
TheDao1Lv4TheDao1

RIP

ErozothDraeor:To be clear, I do not recommend. At one point when a novel gets so annoying to read you are always angry seeing the plot holes and lack of logic its time to drop. The MC is only as smart as the author allows him (or as the author is).
TheDao1
TheDao1Lv4TheDao1

I wish that MC really really have competency, or at least a brain in his head just to avoid me having an ulcer for reading their stupid mistakes. I love OP MC, of course, but I would also like them to have brain to use it...

mujaki2
mujaki2Lv15mujaki2

120 chapters later at the paywall I envy you for stopping while you were ahead :( . I wish character s with 10 chapters of background weren't discarded like trash. Story lines you enjoyed weren't left unfinished. I'm fine with developing parallel plot lines but there must be limits. Instead feels like a different story every 30 chapters.

yoohime
yoohimeLv6yoohime

lol this must be the comment of the year

daoistkitty:Politicians do it all the time. I don’t see why I couldn’t
yoohime
yoohimeLv6yoohime

its lmao not imao

13th_Night:I have no idea what imao means. Can someone explain it to me? Pretty please?
lifebeyondjoy
lifebeyondjoyLv3lifebeyondjoy

https://***.webnovel.com/book/12422387606425505/Can-she-fall-in-love%3F