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Ezra_ErisLv105yr
2019-11-23 15:25

Author has potential but definitely needs to improve their writing style. Story comes out a bit stale at times due to this. Delivery of descriptions, and thoughts and actions could be much better to add more flow to the story and reading. For the plot on its own it’s not bad.

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