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Review Detail of Kroniichiwa in Reborn as Vegeta

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Kroniichiwa
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I'm Here!!! For a review!!! • Writing Quality = 4 star, why? No reason, everyone can improve, and you my friend is an awesome writer. • Stability of Updating = 5 star, Why? On the day I'm writing this review, you released 2-3 new chapter, I don't know if it's like that daily but I do know how hard it is to write a dam.n chapter so If you released 2 or more chapters in a day then that's godly...for my stamdard. XD • Story development = 2 Star, Why so low?? I'm writing this review when im in the middle of the Cell games and I just couldn't continue. A few years of training = A human with 10++ Quadrillion power level?? So talent is basically non existant here(Imagine Frieza training with them. LMFAO they wouldn't be able to keep up!) and thats what make it bland for me. When I was reading a fight it always came down to who have the higher number's win which is kinda predictable. The plot is So-so and the MC at this point is A Vegeta with future knowledge and less prideful instead of a man reincarnated 'as' Vegeta (that's different). No matter what training they do, that purple man will pull out something amd *Baam* he have someone strong as them.. • Character Design = 3 star, why? Like I said above at this point the MC is Vegeta with future knowledge and less prideful instead of a reincarnated man in Vegeta's body. • World background = 3 star, average. I dont think this is important, because its DBZ universe and world background is already been stablished. Overall not as great as other reviews make it out to be, it's nice for a casual read, when you suddenly have an urge to read a powerful MC and everything will go their way. Oh it didn't? Pulls out the Dragon's balls! I rate 5/10

Reborn as Vegeta

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Kroniichiwa
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ALSO!!ALSO!!ALSO!! WEIRD!!! I just realised this is the author of that cool naruto fanfic!?! 😱😱 which means....he's also the author of one of my favorite Spider fic!!?😱😱😱 Man wheres my Chapters at man! 😱😱 JK. 😁😐 *waiting*