Review Detail of Benevolent_One in Expectations Galore

So far I've only written in a spit of inspiration. The world backroubd is **** if you've read cause I haven't introduced it. Character developement is on the mild side due to the current him being already somewhat developed. The updating part is a little skewed, 17 and all that jazz of applying to college, my future job, blah, blah, blah. The quality itself is hard to judge from my perspective so I left it at 3 stars. The story itself is, actually I'm not sure. There is no ulterior goal in writing this except for the fun of it but I am going to write something.