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2019-04-13 05:28

I'll just keep on selfplugging and give myself a perfect score. The writing shouldn't be of any concern, and at a completion after one chapter it's by definition stable. The story comes with a clear beginning, middle and an end. After all, it's completed. Are the characters worth five stars? I hope so. A short story doesn't give you a lot of leeway, but I've tried to depict different personalities within the liimted scope. The setting is my home-town. I know it by heart, and eventual readers should recognise it from what's in here. I feel fairly confident in the world background departement. Oh, and I wanted the EXP for a review as well.

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