Review Detail of DavidKScott in Heaven's Wrath [Old Version]

The story is well written, the narrative is engaging and draws you in. I like that the sect actually seems sensible and tries to protect it's members so that they have room to grow. The antagonists don't immediately become an unthinking big bad, intent on destroying the MC because of a minor perceived slight. Instead while they are human and might take advantage or get angry, they can recognise how to act reasonably. While the MC does seem to be able to abuse their plot device and people seem to be oblivious to the insane speed of MC's progress, I've not yet read far enough to see if this sort of progress would be understandable for an as yet unexplained reason. Given the well thought out nature of the world that the author has built so far though I'm willing to give the benefit of the doubt. Overall a very good start and a novel I will follow eagerly. The five star ratings are deserved.