Review Detail of FallacyPage in Heaven's Wrath [Old Version]

Item: Heaven's Wrath [Old Version]
Rating: 5

Review detail

FallacyPageAuthor5yrFallacyPage

Hello, Fallacy here. As always ignore the shameless 5 stars. I want to actually put romance in this so look out for that, it may become a harem if the plot goes on. I know my grammar sucks but I have been trying to improve that since way back then so please bear with me. Just keep in mind that my past work was pretty brutal so there's a chance that this one will be the same. And I really appreciate the reviews and comments same with the power stone.

Heaven's Wrath [Old Version]

FallacyPage

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Morning_FragranceLv14Morning_Fragrance

Why does the synopsis remind me of Emperor's Domination?

5yr

FallacyPageAuthorFallacyPage

I don't know, I just wrote what sounded cool in my mind while making sure that it stays in context.

Morning_Fragrance:Why does the synopsis remind me of Emperor's Domination?

5yr

SirWolfGangLv11SirWolfGang

harem?no pls

FallacyPage:I don't know, I just wrote what sounded cool in my mind while making sure that it stays in context.

5yr

Morning_FragranceLv14Morning_Fragrance

That's honestly funny since it reminds me a bit of that novel

FallacyPage:I don't know, I just wrote what sounded cool in my mind while making sure that it stays in context.

5yr

GoldenKitsuneLv11GoldenKitsune

No harem please...

5yr

FallacyPageAuthorFallacyPage

I will try my best to avoid this route

SirWolfGang:harem?no pls

5yr

FallacyPageAuthorFallacyPage

I will try to avoid this route, because seriously a loyal MC sounds more pleasing.

GoldenKitsune:No harem please...

5yr

GoldenKitsuneLv11GoldenKitsune

Me too

FallacyPage:I will try to avoid this route, because seriously a loyal MC sounds more pleasing.

5yr

LoneManLv5LoneMan

just add harem fufuf!

5yr

Neo_RagnarLv13Neo_Ragnar

At least 2 or 3 women included and make them appear about 80% or more in the story with Mc and please try to avoid cliché like them getting kidnapped for a long time or the MC won't be able to meet them for a long time.

5yr

FallacyPageAuthorFallacyPage

Well that's what I had in mind, like how women will become strong enough that they don't need to be protected.

Neo_Ragnar:At least 2 or 3 women included and make them appear about 80% or more in the story with Mc and please try to avoid cliché like them getting kidnapped for a long time or the MC won't be able to meet them for a long time.

5yr

FallacyPageAuthorFallacyPage

Well that's what I had in mind, like how women will become strong enough that they don't need to be protected.

Neo_Ragnar:At least 2 or 3 women included and make them appear about 80% or more in the story with Mc and please try to avoid cliché like them getting kidnapped for a long time or the MC won't be able to meet them for a long time.

5yr

GiggleCandyLv5GiggleCandy

harem? guilttrip like Er Mu then I approve.

5yr

EvilWolfLv11EvilWolf

Ikr i hate that or when he goes away and they get attacked or tried to get raped

Neo_Ragnar:At least 2 or 3 women included and make them appear about 80% or more in the story with Mc and please try to avoid cliché like them getting kidnapped for a long time or the MC won't be able to meet them for a long time.

4yr