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xZ4nt
xZ4ntLv145yr
2019-05-06 04:27

Awesome original novel i hope u could release more but 1 chapter a day is good 👍 ill give u some power stones hopefully that will make u keep you confident about your work. Keep it up.

Heaven's Wrath [Old Version]

FallacyPage
4.4
65 Chs

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FallacyPage
FallacyPageAuthor

thank you XD, I'll try to improve the update when i finally have some internet connection in my place

5yr
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NewNEET
NewNEETLv5

Hope he is not a battle maniac.. I'm tired reading novel that always fight then run and fight again.. Like the novel of dragon-marked war god.. Even at chapter 1000 the girl is still virgin.. Sad..

5yr

FallacyPage
FallacyPageAuthor

Hello, Fallacy here. As always ignore the shameless 5 stars. I want to actually put romance in this so look out for that, it may become a harem if the plot goes on. I know my grammar sucks but I have been trying to improve that since way back then so please bear with me. Just keep in mind that my past work was pretty brutal so there's a chance that this one will be the same. And I really appreciate the reviews and comments same with the power stone.

5yr
1Raunak1
1Raunak1Lv11

Awesomeness original novel by wonderful author. There was a time when I simply got tired of reading boring cultivation and game novels when I found this gem. There is still some clichés common to all novels- poor background MC, system, but the author skillfully uses them to their full potential. One thing I liked is the lack of arrogant,silky pants young master. MC's sect is more or less united. There is no intra-disciple killing,intra-elders though there are rankings but it is much peaceful. In my opinion that's how a sect should be. I hate arcs on sect civil wars and MC's first sect being the weakest sect in the weakest kingdom of the spiritually weakest region of the weakest continent ( the list goes on if you know what I mean😏). Here the MC's sect is the strongest in his world and the sect is still powerful and not ruled by young masters. Here elders do not shout ," Kid, don't you know the immensity of heaven and earth!!" I hope the author continues the story in this manner.

5yr
Goksel
GokselLv4

Keep doing i pretty liked .Please just dont put harem or romance .Battle freak or revenge is good choice I dont wanna see some stupid love story (girl is just weight )or MC who thinks with his dick. It must be like Daoist gu(personality)+Strongest system(story) .

5yr
RiverCrow34
RiverCrow34Lv5

Overall this story is great if you like systems and stuff. And even though I can’t say for the future there’s no nsfw. Hhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh

5yr
ericobi
ericobiLv5

Wonderful, thank u for the chapter, it was really interest , the main character ace is really an interesting fellow , I see that u have taking so of the contribution into the story and I can smell something fishy in the air.

5yr
Daoist93
Daoist93Lv5

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5yr
Kaede1999
Kaede1999Lv11

good.........................................................................................................................................................................

5yr
withlovetale
withlovetaleLv12

I've never read this genre of novel but you made it easy for someone like me to understand. I hope this story develops greatly. Good one 👌👌👌👌👌

5yr
Jackofalltrades124
Jackofalltrades124Lv2

i love this story it's well written and while the first chapters grammar isn't the best it keep's getting better and i must say this is my favorite novel so far keep it up please.

5yr
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