Item: Am I Goddess or what?
Rating: 2.6
Author: cutekikichan

cutekikichanLv105yr

2019-03-28 19:42

I kept reading since it had good reviews but I really do not like the writing style: it has lots of grammar mistakes. The story in itself is very interesting but sadly the writing quality ruined it. I like the MC and her interesting ways of seeing the world but other characters could be better developed. Keep up with the hard work author!!!🔥🔥🔥

Am I Goddess or what?

JennyS

Not enough ratings

32 Chs

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MaeraLv11

This isn't worth just 3 stars for the really few and negligible mistakes on some words. That was a lil mean of you I think..

5yr

JennySAuthor

Sorry about the mistakes. It's my first book and I have one more. To make grammar mistakes is given...By the way ,still thanks :)

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cutekikichanLv10

I thought that the concept of this book was truly interesting but the grammar and the way it was presented wasn’t good. I was just giving an honest review to the author and encourage her to keep up with the hard work. I’m sorry if my review seemed insulting, that wasn’t my intention.

Maera:This isn't worth just 3 stars for the really few and negligible mistakes on some words. That was a lil mean of you I think..

5yr

cutekikichanLv10

Yes, just like I said to the previous commenter, please don’t be offended by my comment. I myself am learning english since it is not my main language and it is normal to make a few mistakes. I was just trying to help you by pointing out some parts that could be improved, otherwise I could have left out the comment section as it is since it has nothing to do with me. It was not my intention to insult or offend you in any way, I apologize...

JennyS:Sorry about the mistakes. It's my first book and I have one more. To make grammar mistakes is given...By the way ,still thanks :)

5yr

MaeraLv11

Dear saying that these really few mistaken words are ruining it and giving 3 stars is not encouraging you could have politely point out the mistakes under the chapters as I did or most do. Please don't misunderstand me but I found it quite unfair that's why I commented on it because other people will see it and think from your review that it's unreadable like many are in qidian cause of bad grammar and misspellings.

cutekikichan:I thought that the concept of this book was truly interesting but the grammar and the way it was presented wasn’t good. I was just giving an honest review to the author and encourage her to keep up with the hard work. I’m sorry if my review seemed insulting, that wasn’t my intention.

5yr

JennySAuthor

Thank you for pointing it out. I am not offended,truly. I just wrote and wrote without proofreading. sigh .When I saw the mistakes I made... oh dear God of reading and writing...English is not my mother language. I know its not an excuse. Anyway. Thank you. I will try harder in future ;)

5yr

cutekikichanLv10

Nobody here is being rude😂 My point is that it could have been better and no, nobody said it is a bad novel. Three stars are just my overall review: world background, characters, writing, speed of updating, etc. This is just my opinion and I am free to say and give an honest comment. I just wanted to help the author and other new readers. I am in absolutely no way giving hate comments, never did and never will. Also the author is not offended😉 she was sweet consider my thoughts and went back to check her mistakes😊

Maera:Dear saying that these really few mistaken words are ruining it and giving 3 stars is not encouraging you could have politely point out the mistakes under the chapters as I did or most do. Please don't misunderstand me but I found it quite unfair that's why I commented on it because other people will see it and think from your review that it's unreadable like many are in qidian cause of bad grammar and misspellings.

5yr

cutekikichanLv10

Thank God you did not take it personally😌 I always write what I think without considering the other party’s feelings until the previous commenter pointed it out. I appreciate the fact that you considered my words and went back to check the chapters. Good luck!🍀

JennyS:Thank you for pointing it out. I am not offended,truly. I just wrote and wrote without proofreading. sigh .When I saw the mistakes I made... oh dear God of reading and writing...English is not my mother language. I know its not an excuse. Anyway. Thank you. I will try harder in future ;)

5yr

JennySAuthor

No worries. I know I have a huge problem with grammar, but a friend of mine told me not to correct it all. Just the worst cases :)) I do not mind being scolded at least I know then that people truly read the story :)

cutekikichan:Thank God you did not take it personally😌 I always write what I think without considering the other party’s feelings until the previous commenter pointed it out. I appreciate the fact that you considered my words and went back to check the chapters. Good luck!🍀

5yr

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