the art is good and the plot is good too. but I think I much prefer reading the novel more than the comic. it's just that the comic doesn't give off the right feeling when I was reading the novel of the story. No offense, but I don't like the drawing and how you portray the characters. also, I cannot feel the aura and the feelings of the characters in this comic. I'm also not content with the sequence of the story, I just feel like it's too fast and not vivid enough and it's not detailed enough. If I didn't read the novel, I think I won't understand the sequence of the story and get bored at it, but it's my opinion, though. Sorry for the criticism, its just my opinion. just work hard on the comic, I guess. ššš
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