Review Detail of Luna1777 in Anathema

Because it's only five chapters so I can't judge rashly. The novel's interesting. The story told from First POV. It's easy to read when you have a web novel in a smartphone. I could grasp the big picture of the story. Work more on the character design and world background. Bring more life and exciting things on it! Good luck, keep writing! I will add this to my library. You've done a good job so far!