Review Detail of LastSleepForSummer in Celestial Dragon King, Harem Emperor

I can't even understand a thing. The story was so-so like I gave up after 2-3 chapters. Why the heck is moaning could be considered r-18 already. And it's like it was written by a virgin highschooler. So please don't try to hard to write things you don't have experience for. About the world building it's foundation looks like been build by a scammer construction company. Barely got info about the world and character. Everything is on easy mode. World levels can be treat like nothing. Basically you can't distinguish what the author wants. Anyway that's all. Hope you don't mind my criticism.