Review Detail of Everything_Forever in Vampire Primogenitor in Tokyo Ghoul Universe

The first couple of chapters were amazing! Liked how cold the MC was and his background story was also pretty nice. I thought that woman he met in the void was an annoying character but I understand she was for the MC to go through the different worlds and stuff but I thought she was a little extra. I like the first world you picked,it was a nice choice. Now let's get to the one and only part of this story so far that I have a problem with,the s*x scenes. I personally don't really care for harems and romance all that much because I feel like all that disrupts the flow of the story unless it's specifically a romance novel. The first time the MC had s*x,it was a little annoying but I thought whatever it's only this one let's continue to enjoy the novel,then the second one happened in like the second or third one after that. I thought,that's kind of getting on my nerves what the heck!? Now the story is pretty much just s*x scenes and very little real action. That's very annoying because I originally really liked this novel then the author started putting this stupid stuff in it! The only reason this story isn't getting one star is because I liked the beginning and hope it gets better.