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Darkquestion
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For your information I'm 20 years old and its not that easy to woo me with any old book. With that being said this is the best I've read...you know overlord? Well it got me just as invested in the main character and world development as that. The first book is out(91 chapters) the chapters are long but go by fast because everything thats happening has you so absorbed. Also, my guess is that the only reason the authors book isn't more well known and advertised on the site is to do with the fact that though quidan made some kind of offer to the author, I believe the author had turned them down after reading through the contract. ~(the author in the later chapters only politely mentioned that she had some small disagreements on the offer being put forth~everything else is my speculation)~ But trust me its one of the best books I've read, if I believe otherwise then let me be cursed!  As for why I've rated it so perfectely? Well perhaps there are flaws but for a book to fully absorb me and have me loving it so much that I dont even notice them..what more could you ask for? There are no flaws that I've noticed, I enjoyed myself the whole way! Thanks Author!

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The Birth of a Monster (The First Vampire I)

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JelimAuthorJelim

Thankyou for your support, I'm very happy has had such an impact on you. As for quidan...it's not really anything bad, they made an offer, the contract wasn't something I liked so I said I'd be willing to sign the contract if they changed tlpoints a, b & c. They verbally told me these points were leniant or didn't happen but didn't put it in a new contract so I refused to sign. Only thing I really lost from that was an income, but for someone whose dream it is to be an author, I get a lot more from the comments and reviews like this that tell me i'm doing a good job, so thanks again.

Chaoticmike
ChaoticmikeLv14Chaoticmike

Nice picture change, though the last picture help me decide on how the mc would be looking like. But since you changed it does that mean your ready for more awesome release of your chapters from your novel?

Jelim:Thankyou for your support, I'm very happy has had such an impact on you. As for quidan...it's not really anything bad, they made an offer, the contract wasn't something I liked so I said I'd be willing to sign the contract if they changed tlpoints a, b & c. They verbally told me these points were leniant or didn't happen but didn't put it in a new contract so I refused to sign. Only thing I really lost from that was an income, but for someone whose dream it is to be an author, I get a lot more from the comments and reviews like this that tell me i'm doing a good job, so thanks again.
Jelim
JelimAuthorJelim

Well it's getting closer. More info soon

Chaoticmike:Nice picture change, though the last picture help me decide on how the mc would be looking like. But since you changed it does that mean your ready for more awesome release of your chapters from your novel?
Chaoticmike
ChaoticmikeLv14Chaoticmike

Is it because of writing block or busy life issues?

Jelim:Well it's getting closer. More info soon
Jelim
JelimAuthorJelim

Busy rewriting and editing first volume. Just over halfway done. The chapters with the * symbol are edited. You can reread over those to pass the time as there are changes to some aspects. But will release something in about a weekish depending on my writing speed. Thanks for your support😉

Chaoticmike:Is it because of writing block or busy life issues?
Chaoticmike
ChaoticmikeLv14Chaoticmike

Is editing chapter has some type of different ending towards the last chapter or it just ends the same but more detail?

Jelim:Busy rewriting and editing first volume. Just over halfway done. The chapters with the * symbol are edited. You can reread over those to pass the time as there are changes to some aspects. But will release something in about a weekish depending on my writing speed. Thanks for your support😉
Jelim
JelimAuthorJelim

Some of it has changed a little bit. The only major change I was making though was that Aegin's story was going to change slightly in the beginning to make where his story ended up more clear in terms of character arcs. That's not to say that minor changes won't effect the overall tone of the story as well. You'll just have to judge for yourself as I obviously can't put it all into this little reply box.

Chaoticmike:Is editing chapter has some type of different ending towards the last chapter or it just ends the same but more detail?
Darkquestion
DarkquestionLv11Darkquestion

Your highly skilled and I believe you have the skill to be an author as a career. In my opinion their are only a few obsticles in your way to achieve such a goal-namely getting your book widely known(even outside of just the webnovel readers). My suggestions; once you've finished the second or third volume you should first look for getting some professional cover art done and then proceed to start looking for a publisher. Send it to any and every publisher and see what happens. It would do you wonders to get it on shelves next to the light novel or fantasy sections-it'll help people instinctually consider it a "real book". On a seperate note, I believe the nature of your story would be very popular in the east as well..I find myself wondering about the worth of getting the first volume of your novel translated and put onto a popular chinese website. Now to be honest however, im not too sure if most chinese readers will read books in english anyways or not, but if not its something worth keeping in the back of your mind. If you ever do want a definitive answer on if its worth it or not, you could contact deathblade(a very well respected translator over at **********) and asking him about the viability and worth of getting it translated for chinese readers, he knows lots about that stuff. **now im pretty sure you already know yourself how to best handle everything much more clearly than I do, but as a fan I cant help but root for you and give suggestions! Have a good day! ~Dq

Jelim:Thankyou for your support, I'm very happy has had such an impact on you. As for quidan...it's not really anything bad, they made an offer, the contract wasn't something I liked so I said I'd be willing to sign the contract if they changed tlpoints a, b & c. They verbally told me these points were leniant or didn't happen but didn't put it in a new contract so I refused to sign. Only thing I really lost from that was an income, but for someone whose dream it is to be an author, I get a lot more from the comments and reviews like this that tell me i'm doing a good job, so thanks again.