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Interesting premise with a nice introduction in the first chapter. There are few grammatical mistakes and decent vocabulary, although some commas aren’t really necessary. Can’t say anything about the main character yet because there is a single chapter out right now, but he doesn’t seem like an a*shole at least. Giving it five stars to encourage the author :)

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Survival With A System

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