Review Detail of SkillsMasterAkurai in March of the Transcendent

Item: March of the Transcendent
Rating: 3.6

Review detail

SkillsMasterAkuraiLv145yrSkillsMasterAkurai

To be honest this story is great it has a good story (for me at least) plus it's creative in my opinion but I feel it needs just a bit of fixing here or there

March of the Transcendent

ResidualEvil

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ResidualEvilAuthorResidualEvil

Any suggestions on what to add or improve on?

5yr

SkillsMasterAkuraiLv14SkillsMasterAkurai

The only this I can tell to improve is your grammar and spelling and something to add is more depth in the plot I guess not sure.

ResidualEvil:Any suggestions on what to add or improve on?

5yr

Shallow_vernalLv10Shallow_vernal

Harem?

ResidualEvil:Any suggestions on what to add or improve on?

4yr