This is good. I can't find any mistakes, although I say that I am biased as **** due to this being so good so I may be refusing to see any mistakes. The only thing I dislike is the conflicting emotions at first due to me wanting it to be a single lover and then wanting it to be a harem. While I don't want to be a hypocrite and go back on my previous thought of not wanting to have a harem, cause usually the MC forgets everything else and focuses on his girls and reverting back to a horny teenager, I feel like the author could do a good job and make a harem story without all the bad **** that comes with it. And guess what? He does exactly that, while we don't get to see any romance much, it's still there just in the form of 50 year times skips, while I know this seems like a convenient way to not write any romance into the novel, it actually flows really well, plus it seems like all the romance scenes and the depth of the relationship will be shown once the story starts to pick up and go with the main cannon storyline. Oh, and I also like that the author doesn't write H-scenes, I really don't need 1 or 2 chapters about how the MC ****ed his girl silly until she had an ahegao face. I really don't need that **** in my life or in my search history.
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