Review Detail of Lazyy in Fate's False Servant
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Overall, I love the book. The MC and his relations with other characters feel real and I can genuinely enjoy reading about him just lazing about while talking to Iris or Saber, or even just playing with Illya. This is a new feeling for me as I usually hate it when this happens, I love reading about fighting rather than slice of life but the Author of this book does Slice of life in such a way that it just makes you feel satisfied, ya know? That's not to say I don't dislike some things about the story. One such thing would be how early you got Iris pregnant. I'd rather Iris and the MC have a romantic relationship, which over time (I'm talking years, not months) built up to them having a child, but instead they have *** once and she's instantly pregnant. Seems a tad rushed to me. He already has Illya who he sees as his own child, so he didn't really need to have one with Iris. So soon, anyway. But overall, I still love the book. Great read.
Fate's False Servant
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I do ageee that he didn’t need to have one with Iris so soon however I also felt it was the best time. I will go more in depth about Ryker’s biology later on but as for why I had Iris get pregnant before they left on the trip was due to the fact that I wanted to introduce him and let him grow slightly so she didn’t give birth while they were traveling or after the war. As for the one time and baby, they actually did it quite a few times which were hinted at but not given an +18 chapter for. She could have gotten pregnant on the first time or maybe it was the second, they don’t really know. The reason they had found out early on was due to Ryker’s ability to see the fetus. Regardless thanks for your review! Hearing everyone’s opinions means a lot :)