Review Detail of DeonEx in Fate's False Servant
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I really have to give it to the author for converting a tragic story into a heartwarming one(so far atleast). The character interactions, their goals, ideals are all introduced and explained upon beautifully. The MC is pretty awesome too, atleast he doesn't act like a immature virgin who just wants to get into others pants but genuinely loves the other person and cares for her. Although, there's a lack of action scenes but it's a nice change of pace from all the generic troupes. I recommend anyone who stumbles upon this to give it a try.
Fate's False Servant
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Thanks for the awesome review! You helped the book get an overall star review and I'm very happy atm :) I'm glad you enjoy my take on things, and don't worry about the action scenes they will be a large part of the story later on! I honestly feel that writing action scenes is one of my strongest suits compared to writing slice of life chapters but my favorite aspect of writing is Romance so that's why it has a strong presence in the story. I feel as though the characters you have to work with in Fate, all have relatively tragic pasts but there is so much room for happiness as well and when that character that we felt sorry for originally is given a happy tale it cant help but warm ones heart! Thanks again for the review and I hope you enjoy the future progression of the story!!