Cool story.. Has a vibes of death notes.! 😄 I love their unfamiliar names... So new to me..😍😍 I admit it, I enjoy MC's wittiness.. Involving the readers in such matter was smart move... Writingvquality just need a little polishing.. I don't know about the others, but in my opinion, it's better not to repeat the last paragraph as the opening words of the next chapter.. Overall, great job. Keep it up..👍👍
Immortal_God420
Liked by 2 people
LIKE