Review my story, English is not my native languge.
Feel free to coment about the story, it is only a hobby and my first time wrtiting.
Also decide if you want harem or not , Possible main girl is Hinata or Ino, or both..
Don’t make it Harem please that would ruin the story in my opinion just go with Hinata. Otherwise you would struggle more near the end if you try to tie in Ino with Naruto.