Review Detail of Tinalynge in Across Time and Space

This story is incredibly interesting. Writing Quality: I thought that overall, it was well written. There were a few mistakes here and there, but nothing that took away from my joy of reading the story. Stability of updates: I read everything in one go, and have not waited for more, so I am unable to comment on this point. Story development: I liked the pace of the story. It is detailed enough, but at the same time not so detailed that it gets boring. Enough happens but it does not feel rushed. Character development: The characters are good, there was a bit of lack of information from the start, but it was very interesting to slowly get to know them. I like the way they are written. World background: The world is described well, I like how it is being introduced without forcing focus away from the plot. Well done!