Review Detail of Ishita23 in Across Time and Space

Was hooked by just reading the synopsis. However, you may want to expand it a little bit by introducing one or two lines of conversation. But that's just my opinion 😉 The plot is good and developing well. Can't wait to read further. Character and world background is well developed. Although there are a few glitches here and there, but the smooth flow of the story makes up for it. This one goes straight to my library 😁