[Just a rant and I understand my opinion doesnt matter nothing personal dude]Kind off wack how you call the mc emotionless [ more like you're trying to make you're mc sound edgy] when he keeps showing emotion to stuff like bunch of kids who he's been around for three years I mean I get that attachment and stuff but he'll more like can control his emotion somehow emotionless means cutting off getting and not getting angry about stupid đ© like that lion chic stealing your money just saying P.S : just so we're on same page assasin are like who are stealthy and are barely noticeable pretty surr the mc is more like a warrior or berserker kinda seems off when he's called assassin when he's doing everything you never see an assassin do.
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LIKEWell, I am basing the fighting style of Akame Ga Kill it is more like a brutal style of assassins as in the anime they attack a large number of opponents up close and personal. But I will have to say every opinion matters as long as it is constructive criticism which you actually did. I don't mind asking any of your questions.
Slacott3:And harems usually make story end sooner and start sounding more fantasy like dude just pick one chic who gives a ****e about all this horny readers who usually mess up a story cause of their wanting to include girls in harem when you can clearly tell they don't suit mc whatsoever