Review Detail of Arisuse in Dragon Ga Kill [Original]
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No harem please, it s better without and forget his past life but only small memories but it s your fanfiction, it s just my opinion ( sorry for the grammar ). Thank for the futur chapter !!!
Dragon Ga Kill [Original]
GhostyXXX
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No harem, I must also disagree with you, he is not "ordering" he said "please", he did not write it authoritatively as "do not do a harem", if not in an application form "no harem, please". Also at the end he said "it's just an opinion, it's a fan-fic after all", so be friend.
AwronZizao:Doesn't sound like an opinion lmao, sounds more like you ordering. Plus, I have to disagree with your "opinion" on the no harem. The Supreme Harem Dao shall prevail.
Still came across as an order, when you read what they said, it doesn't come across as *Please don't do Harem.* It comes across as *don't do harem, because harem bad.*
FangMing:No harem, I must also disagree with you, he is not "ordering" he said "please", he did not write it authoritatively as "do not do a harem", if not in an application form "no harem, please". Also at the end he said "it's just an opinion, it's a fan-fic after all", so be friend.
What is your problem with people stating opinions? I remember you replying to one of my comments like, 3 months ago, because I was apparently ordering the author to do certain things, despite the fact that I was providing my opinions and thoughts politely. And here you are again, throwing out sass left and right. I'm so unreasonably triggered right now. This particular comment was clearly not an order. Just because he/she/it phrased it in a way that might be interpreted by certain individuals as an order, does not make it an order. Sure, it would be better if he wrote "I feel that it would be better without a harem, I also feel that it would be better for him to forget his past life", but you are simply cherry picking a sentence written (by someone who is probably not a native english speaker, or is a young reader), and not taking the whole comment into account. "But it's your fanfiction", "It's just my opinion", do you not take these into account? Do you only read the first half?
AwronZizao:Doesn't sound like an opinion lmao, sounds more like you ordering. Plus, I have to disagree with your "opinion" on the no harem. The Supreme Harem Dao shall prevail.
Do you not read a thing I say either? Trying to act intelligent just cause you're mad and upset? Have you ever read the word "sound"? Because I'm pretty sure I said "Doesn't SOUND like and opinion". What is with people getting so triggered over this, jfc. I'm pretty sure I've said worse than this in the past and now everyone is so mad about it? Rather than automatically thinking I'm some kind of Nazi incarnate, regardless if they're a young reader or not a native English speaker if they leave a review, on a public site and on a public novel, I'm afraid to say I can say whatever the hell I want in response because they're the ones who set themselves up for a possible disagreement. I'm cherry picking? Aren't you doing the same thing with my sentences then? Don't be such a gigantic hypocrite you troglodyte. You're acting like I've insulted him for no reason somewhere, I haven't done a damn thing. If I replied to you in the past because of that, then it obviously came across as an order, so stop thinking it's so damn special, can't handle someone being honest? Then gtfo.
BowmanW:What is your problem with people stating opinions? I remember you replying to one of my comments like, 3 months ago, because I was apparently ordering the author to do certain things, despite the fact that I was providing my opinions and thoughts politely. And here you are again, throwing out sass left and right. I'm so unreasonably triggered right now. This particular comment was clearly not an order. Just because he/she/it phrased it in a way that might be interpreted by certain individuals as an order, does not make it an order. Sure, it would be better if he wrote "I feel that it would be better without a harem, I also feel that it would be better for him to forget his past life", but you are simply cherry picking a sentence written (by someone who is probably not a native english speaker, or is a young reader), and not taking the whole comment into account. "But it's your fanfiction", "It's just my opinion", do you not take these into account? Do you only read the first half?
AwronZizao:Still came across as an order, when you read what they said, it doesn't come across as *Please don't do Harem.* It comes across as *don't do harem, because harem bad.*
Friend need glasses, improve your English or maybe leave drugs (no offense) but his first prayer was "no harem, please". I say nothing more.
AwronZizao:Still came across as an order, when you read what they said, it doesn't come across as *Please don't do Harem.* It comes across as *don't do harem, because harem bad.*
You, of all people is telling me to improve my English? Then, why the hell be a hypocritical coward and say "no offence" after clearly insulting me and meaning offence? Just call me a druggy and grow some balls lmao. Before telling someone to improve their English, maybe make sure you actually know how to use it yourself.
FangMing:Friend need glasses, improve your English or maybe leave drugs (no offense) but his first prayer was "no harem, please". I say nothing more.
This friend here needs to know what sarcasm is. Go to the school drug lord, I also like to be without balls, so your mother loves me more
AwronZizao:You, of all people is telling me to improve my English? Then, why the hell be a hypocritical coward and say "no offence" after clearly insulting me and meaning offence? Just call me a druggy and grow some balls lmao. Before telling someone to improve their English, maybe make sure you actually know how to use it yourself.
Seriously, what the hell are you talking about? I don't understand a goddamn word you're trying to say. You like to be without balls so my mother loves you more? So what, you like it when my mother pegs you? Go to the school drug lord? What kind of drug lord is still in school? Are you using google translate or something?
FangMing:This friend here needs to know what sarcasm is. Go to the school drug lord, I also like to be without balls, so your mother loves me more
Zephir_:Eu não sei o que aconteceu aqui, mas nós não podemos simplesmente aproveitar o romance em paz? É tão fácil respeitar a opinião dos outros ou responder de forma educada, sem se exaltar... (Sim, estou escrevendo em outra língua. Eu chamei a sua atenção e te fiz usar o tradutor? Hehehe)
Zephir_:Eu não sei o que aconteceu aqui, mas nós não podemos simplesmente aproveitar o romance em paz? É tão fácil respeitar a opinião dos outros ou responder de forma educada, sem se exaltar... (Sim, estou escrevendo em outra língua. Eu chamei a sua atenção e te fiz usar o tradutor? Hehehe)
Zephir_:Eu não sei o que aconteceu aqui, mas nós não podemos simplesmente aproveitar o romance em paz? É tão fácil respeitar a opinião dos outros ou responder de forma educada, sem se exaltar... (Sim, estou escrevendo em outra língua. Eu chamei a sua atenção e te fiz usar o tradutor? Hehehe)
Zephir_:Eu não sei o que aconteceu aqui, mas nós não podemos simplesmente aproveitar o romance em paz? É tão fácil respeitar a opinião dos outros ou responder de forma educada, sem se exaltar... (Sim, estou escrevendo em outra língua. Eu chamei a sua atenção e te fiz usar o tradutor? Hehehe)
Zephir_:Eu não sei o que aconteceu aqui, mas nós não podemos simplesmente aproveitar o romance em paz? É tão fácil respeitar a opinião dos outros ou responder de forma educada, sem se exaltar... (Sim, estou escrevendo em outra língua. Eu chamei a sua atenção e te fiz usar o tradutor? Hehehe)