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I have no idea about the future of the story and how it will branch out. The first chapter made the whole thing even more confusing. It gave me fleeing that Tian Mo will somehow restart the universe or why would he abandon the Phoenix Fang girl like trash or brutally kill his empathic brother. I read nine chapters and it kept me interested throughout. The main character is interesting but I am still not rooting for him. I need more description of the world and environment to really get into the story. I like the story so far so I will keep reading until I am no longer interested. I think your story blow up unless the whole site is full of just horny bulls like I think it is. Some of the stories with just one chapter have more views because there is *** on the title. It takes more time to get recognized for good writing so don't give up because I think you will get contracted within two months. The quality of writing is excellent considering you put out so many chapters in less than three weeks. I am jealous of your writing ability. I started reading the first(0) chapter without looking at the synopsis. So I thought Long Wei was the protagonist. I started rooting for him. On the second chapter, I was waiting for him to somehow reincarnate but imagine my surprise.

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Thank you for your review! It is very encouraging to see people that appreciate my work. Chapter 0 is intentionally confusing, but as long as you keep it in mind, there will be things you should be able to infer. As promised, I will read and review your story this weekend (If I don't finish tomorrow, I will definitely finish by Sunday).