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Harris_Kirik
Harris_KirikLv43yr
2021-11-06 21:05

I had to write another review after reading 400 chapters. Everything was going great until chapter 300. From there everything started getting worse. Translation started becoming like machine translation, Ryo started his hardest after the plot started (naruto went to academy) to make every single thing like in the actual plot (which makes 0 sense since he has already changed so many things before). So now after 400 chapters I can not read anymore because this novel was ruined... The worst part is he never become the hokage (the novels name is ryo - hokage) but has made sakumo not the fifth but a temporary hokage ho has been a hokage for a decade now.... Utter nonsense... 😕

Hokage Ryo's Path

nyawdao
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570 Chs

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Greasy_Mechanic
Greasy_MechanicLv15

I agree with the translation issue. as far as the Hokage- Path title, he could become it after the 4th war and before Naruto does. All in all, it is mostly enjoyable.

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The beginning seemed to be good, but MS knows the plot of Naruto and remembers it. Therefore, it was necessary to do the most dangerous thing that can be thought up in Konoha before the 3rd war, to show a huge talent so that danzo would want to take him and finish school earlier so that he would be taken to the war. Bravo. If you want action, then don't do the dumbest thing that can push the plot

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Hi, i am author :) This is my first novel here, and second novel i write (the first one not here). Sorry if grammar is bad, i am not native english. but i will do my best.

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Nevren
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The mc never once kills any canon characters and in general the larger story line is exactly the same as canon. Nothing interesting or unique happens, the author just sticks to canons rails never trying to change anything or give the mc any unique impact. If you've read the original story there's no reason to read this.

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Harris_Kirik
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This is quite a solid naruto fanfic. The grammar is possible and the plot is quite good so far. Not to mention it has over 400 chapters already. All in all, I highly recommend for all naruto fans to read the novel. 👍

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Terrible novel 1 completely wrong information on naruto 2 says one thing next paragraph or chapter changes it to another "doesn't know, then does know" 3 idiotic mc doing a"test" at 4 years old through cutting of fingers Probably more but this was within 4 chapters

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use the Sharingan but belittles the Uchiha why even make him an Uchiha mc super powerful for absolutely no apparent reason he keeps the Biju enslaved yet speaks of peace?

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I thought it was a good novel at start, but the more I read the more I found ut to be trash, trying to stay as close as he can to the canon absolutely ruined the story, try it if you want, it turns into absolute trash after madaras death, perhaps predictions could be made before that too

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