webnovel
avatar

Review Detail of Vihm in A Word of Advice

Review detail

Vihm
VihmLv35yrVihm

Hello. Your English is quite good. Up til whatever I read it felt like the view of a newborn baby whose parents are not on good terms. Your technique is quite sharp. I like it though . Don't get upset or mad at me but I wanted to say that although your technique and vocabulary is superb , the usage is a bit... confusing. It may happen I m the dumb one not able to understand your writing very well. (It's just a piece of opinion nothing on the bad side . I hope I didn't upset you . But thank you for your good work ☺)

altalt

A Word of Advice

KingPufflePuff

Liked by 1 people

LIKE

Replies2

KingPufflePuff
KingPufflePuffAuthorKingPufflePuff

Thanks for the review! I’m newer to writing novels so I’m sorry if my technique still needs a bit of work. I’ll do my best to improve. ^-^

Vihm
VihmLv3Vihm

So relieved to know I didn't upset you. I wish for your growth(although I myself am a newbie 😉) . If you get time would you like to comment on my work too. You know mutual growth(it's Love : a bond or freedom) Thank you for understanding too. Bye