I am not one to be intrigued by game worlds or those stuff but the way you wrote this book was really simple and easy to understand . You have a vivid imagination of what you are writing and you display it very well. You also have the tendency to repeat words like in chapter 1, you kept in repeating MIND whereas you can interchange with the synonyms of mind. And this genre is not fantasy, it should sci-fi or another.
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LIKETo help your confusion if this needs sci-fi tag. This is a game world with fantasy setting. Sci-fi typically refers to theoretical technology or future technology. The Sci-fi tag in game system novels is usually for the high-tech VR pod systems or similar ones since those might exist in the future..
QueenRani6:oh ok, maybe because I haven't read more deeply but a game world isn't really fantasy to me