Review Detail of Ak02 in Fire Mage
Review detail
Shameless Author here. This is my second book and I wrote novel mainly to improve my writing skills. If you find it interesting, comment or give me a honest review. It will be very helpful to me. That's it guys, have fun reading!
Fire Mage
Ak02
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Hmm... I love scheming and yeah, I agree with you, trusting your life on someone else or something else isn't a good idea. Yes, we may need to rely on others sometimes since there isn't a perfect being in this world (let's just exclude those gods mentioned by different religions since some of them are calling them perfect existences.) no one is able to excel at all things and there will always be a time where we were going to need help from outside forces but being over reliant on someone or something like those MCs on other novels isn't a good idea. Boosting your strength first before boosting your wisdom is dependent upon the situation. Although I have not yet red the novel but according to what you've said, I'll just interpret it as the MC being transmigrated to another world without having a good and stable force to rely upon so I think what you've made the MC to do is a wise choice. Like what FY (Fang Yuan) at Reverend Insanity always says: 'There is no one you can trust in this world except yourself.' strengthening ownself's power is a must.
Ak02:I don't know how to give pros and cons about my novel. Hmm, MC mostly rely on his former assassin skills and would increase his strength instead of wisdom during the first 20+ chaps. Many readers said that it was a foolish decision, but to me, it was the opposite. If I were thrown into such position, I would rely on my own skills than some system and magic spells. Next is about the plot. You may find that the story seemed to be forced in some places, but everything has its own reasons and you will only find out the reason at the end of vol.1. And I'm 90 percent sure that you won't get disappoined when you complete reading the first volume. That's why I locked chaps after the first volume and let the readers decide if my story is worth paying or not. There are some mistakes I made when writing the story like I added a Magic Pistol with long cooldown to let MC have a trump card. But many readers didn't like that idea. MC is smart but not too smart, thinks a lot like LOTM's Mc, and sometimes ruthless. As for romance, I still didn't put much attention on this. And, there will be many twists and schemes in this novel.[img=recommend]
Yeah, I too noticed the mistakes. When I write two chapters a day, I find it a little harder to check and even miss those errors. That's why I'm once again thinking of releasing one chapter per day. Thanks for the support, and I will give it my all.
Sangam25852:There are some errors in the numbering in earlier chapters. But in overall, this is some of the rare novel I have read until now where the flow of story is slow and smooth as well as no rushing. Good job, Author. Expecting new chapters soon. 👍👍👍👍👍
MC's best friend? Are you talking about the one in the synopsis? The main story starts after the transmigration, so there is no way John could travel back to Earth and punish him now. But it might happen in future chapters. It depends on the situation.
ahmed_tanim:mr. author, will mc's best friend remain unpunished?
