Review Detail of HastySloth in Touch of Fate

Not perfect, but certainly better than a lot of the other novels on this website. The MC is a bit underwhelming in terms of personality, but the system is interesting and the world is well flavored. Speaking of which, the world building in this novel is excellent. Although not exactly original (it is a fairly standard sword and sorcery setting), the author has clearly put a lot of thought into how the world works. So much so, that I'm looking forward to when the MC begins to explore other parts of it. There's even a world (well regional) map posted on one of the first few chapters. Honestly, if the author ever follows through on his/her promise of rewriting the first part of the story, and does some fairly significant editing to the rest, this could easily be publishable.