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Review Detail of equinotic in Touch of Fate

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(Writing Quality): What most stories fail to do on Webnovel are have good grammar, something this story does amazingly right. (5/5) (Stability of Updates): Nearly a constant daily release between chapters, with the author barely missing a beat. (5/5) (Story Development): The story is mostly about the adventures of Mike (MC) in another world, and there is no real story or plot for some part of the beginning. It doesn't pick up for a little, but this isn't necessarily a bad thing. As for the story itself, it seems a little cliche, but I don't have any problems with it. (4/5) (Character Design): Two minor flaws with the characters are the MC himself, and the tropes other characters sometimes take on. The MC is said to have over two million experiences, but this doesn't really reflect well in the story. Fortunately, he doesn't act inherently idiotic or stupid, and most of the time people call him "a StUpId mC" are because of a minor mistake or something that wasn't really stupid. The trope characters, most noteably his tsundere companion, don't actually act like that all the time, but tend to fall into that characterization more often than not. (4/5) (World Background): The other world's background is not actually focused on for a long time. As the novel goes along the journey, it describes the places the MC visits. It isn't until near the middle to end of the second volume the MC learns more of the world itself. The history is actually explored quite a bit and given a few chapters describing it. The author gives explanation for a lot of the reasons the world works the way it does, and it doesn't feel like it's an entire info dump. (5/5) As of the end of volume two, I have really, really liked this story. It should definitely be given a chance to read, and deserves a much higher ranking as compared to other stories. I should also mention, for what readers tend to focus on a lot, is that as of right now, there is no harem. While there are romantic interests, there are only hinted at, and it hasn't been fully established (to my knowledge) if there will be a harem or not.

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