It's unreadable, the author is clearly not a english native, i don't have problems with a bad orthographe and a readable grammar but here it's the vocabulary the biggest problem, the author often use a word that he clearly confouds with an other one and it breaks the immersion in the story, well i am myself not a english native and my orthographe and grammar sucks so i should not speak too much^^
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