I want more. New goblin story with a twist. Bye the time you’ve finished chapter 5 or 6. Good read Cons so short I could take longer to spit. No daily or even weekly updates this will be so deep in your library bye the time it updates that you will need to reread it. Righter has already rote himself into a corner from the beginning. Spoilers Standard changed into a monster world domination type story. Ok that’s cool. So what is wrong? Well that would be, becoming slow and repetitive from level up invade a place rinse-and repeat. It’s going to be tuff on the righter to keep this interesting later on. The fighting and conflict with mc is downplayed bye the righting style. No hart pumping hand clenching conflicts here. It is not a bad thing, I just hope there is enough conflict from him messing with the goblins to keep me coming back.
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Appreciate the constructive criticism. Don't worry, I will release 10-15 chapters by 18th March, sort of a mass release and you won't be disappointed. ;)
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