Review Detail of Dipster in The one I Love

I like the simple, no non-sense story-line. I also like how the author has shown the relationship between cousins and friends. Jealousy among friends and subsequent misunderstandings are all a part of ****-age lives and that has been well-depicted. While i applaud the author for taking the plunge and giving to her desire to write, i feel that better writing quality in terms of more attention to grammar ( direct speech, indirect speech, tenses) would let her reach a much wider audience.