This fanfic is much better than Pokemon: Jordinio and Pokemon: An Unexpected Journey, changes my mind.

Hidden gem pokemon story. op Mc with aura focus long chapters 100+ chapters

ok. i must say that as its really good. I read all the chapters in 4 days... The most surprising thing in this whole story is... um... The Goudere Joy and the segs! We need more detailed lemons. Like a whole chapter. People can skip it if they want and you can just write the short summary of any important thing told during it for the sensitive. Also, put tags in the novel or it wont show up in the list.

not gonna lie changing a spoiler book into an actual story was a smart move xD the premise seems a bit generic but what doesn't in this day and age when so many ideas were already tried out i will follow along and watch how it develops xD

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I've never read a pokemon fanfic, but as I like the author's writing, I gave this one a chance, and I really liked it, I hope you don't stop updating.

I really like this story, but because the reviews here are from your other story. This is Pokémon, not the one of the successor God, however it improves the rate of chapters that I can't wait for XD

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