Seems slightly rushed in the beginning and the mc personality switches to swiftly after meeting yang, ruby, and tai. Mc will bash other characters for their actions but his can be just as reckless if not more he does whatever he wants not thinking of consequences. Plus by making him so overpowered so quickly makes the story lose character development. Plus the way the mc is written makes you wonder if he’s just crazy, stupid, or just childish. In the end okay story if you aren’t to picky and serious about character development.

Yo this a story meant for someone like me so for anybody that likes a sadistic,psychotic,mentally crazy mc this is for u!😈hehehehe come join the darkside

Annoying and edgy mc is edgy and annoying. I think the mc honestly lacks common sense and acts like he's one of those xianxia novel MC's who kill anyone who breaths. Instead of his nickname you should call him the Edge Lord for acting like some forsaken **** with a tragic backstory.

How this novel has over 4 stars baffles me, if you are reading it, word of warning, you are reading it for its trash, edge, and violent mood swings that suddenly happen with no warning. If you dislike stories that aren't serious in their development, then you might want to give this one a pass. There are some things that make it a worthwhile read, but never take the novel seriously The hell did I just read, "I don't kill innocents" (kills them for fun) "They are future wife material" (Nothing before or after that saying he's wanting them) "Ah I understand my mistake" (proceeds to commit the same mistake in the future, cause inconsistency (also it happened without any real warning)) And the killing and the whole assassin thing is just a joke, the author does like 3 chapters being an assassin.... Now then, the quality is decent (though it's typo galore), I don't know about updates, story development is just a tweens horny story, character design if we look at the mc's OC alone, we can see it's terrible, and the world background..... I'm just gonna say the only redeeming factor is the prologue, cause that was the whole reason I was interested in the story, but now that I read all this.... I'm disappointed Readers who still hear, I shall repeat myself one last time. A word of warning if you wish to read the fanfiction, you are reading it for its inconsistencies, and for how trashy a novel can be. This may be an insult, but no joke you are reading it for its trash, and it's comedy aspects. Believe me when I say that you should never read it seriously, otherwise you will never get through it. There are some inclusions inside this terrible novel that just make you continue forward, but there are also spots where you will just drop right then and there. You have been warned

This story has been nothing but a trainwreck. I had my hopes that the chapters and the Main Character "Mesa Uchiha" will improve, but so far, I haven't seen anything that can fix his character and this story. I really wish you can think of something to fix this. Introducing an MC that has OP powers is no problem, but the fact that you made him way too powerful and even describe him as an "excellent" character to the point of him becoming a narcissistic completely lost my interest as a reader and I can probably say the same to the others that have read your fanfiction.

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This **** is addicting, don't watch it. First, you will be thinking that this is a story about how an assassin is gonna start feeling some emotions and ****, right? Or how he changes his ways like some other assassin (Black Cat)? Wrong! This is about how a motherfucking badass that doesn't care about others, their feelings, opinions or any kind of **** like that! This is about Mesa Uchiha, a fucking eagle of freedom, that does what he wants, says and thinks what he wants, without being constrained by societies values/principals. Now I repeat, don't read this, you'll get hooked the same way you got hooked on drugs. If you do read this, once you're in, theirs no turning back, so prepare your a*us as this fan-fics about to go deep, real deep into some philosophies and just phycological ****/physcho **** all around. Once again, prepare you a*us as this fanfic's gonna give it to you hard and it's gonna be painful, but you will enjoy it. Everyone who reads this fucking masterpiece to the did as well.

This is one of the few stories that can be ranked at the top for me sure his actions may not seem logical but thats the point you dont understand what he does he is an experienced asssassin whit no common reason he only does what he thinks is fun sure he might have a master plan but he still the same person in the beginning u will think that its a bit weird whit all that becoming family whit yand and tuby at the start but it adds so much more flavor to the story on the later arcs.

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